DJkurokami - The foolish desire (Vocaloid Original / Short Edit) feat. Luka Megurine V4X

Hi, I'm a Japanese newbie vocaloid Producer. This is my first vocaloid original song I uploaded. I hope to make metalcore or djent vocaloid songs mainly. but my skills are bad now (especially mix. it's so difficult to me...). If you can, I want your advice. Thanks! ----- Lyrics ----- I know you don't notice, about my feelings yet. (Why you keep making mistakes..?) Bad ending is near. We are into the hell. Why you keep laughing me? Your lie will turn our world. Into the place (that) we don't want. but please remember a fact (that) I just wanted to be happy with you. I feel heartache even if it wll be end soon. Reality is pressing me. your warms. your feels. your face. your all. Please love me again, I will forgive you. Get back to home together to forget it. ----- Attention ----- Sorry, I may wrote strange English. X)