【Fukase】Unforgiven【VOCALOID Original Song + PV】

[[Happy birthday Fukase! Have a really shitty original song!]] Hi everyone! So more than anything this was just a really big experiment; I have no idea what Im doing and while I have looked up some music theory, all in all I don't know shit. ;v; Ive been wanting to make original songs for a while now and I actually started this... over a month ago? And I figured, hey, Fukase's birthday is coming up, let's plan to release this on his birthday! ... Yeah! Anyways I'll be the first to admit this is kind of a mess, the lyrics aren't very good, ect. But!! Hopefully in the future I'll get better! I've already learned a LOT with this and overall it was pretty fun to do! But constructive criticism is definitely welcome haha; While i've accepted this as finished I'm not 100% happy with how it's come out, so any tips on things I should work on or focus on learning is accepted. Video, Art, Lyrics, Song, ect all by Devsies DL for Instrumental, VSQX and mp3 file: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ilibsqvva0n7r7k/Unforgiven%20Inst%2BVSQX.rar?dl=0 Lyrics: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G7wULX-L0iA1lmEguaVKeFfQ_hqUylLQV0KHi-kLqXo/edit?usp=sharing *Please note that I do not allow the re-upload of my original songs or videos for any reason except for covers/remixes if I release the instrumental. ('Nightcore' doesn't count as a remix.) If you wish to translate this song you can use the CC option; do not re-upload with your own subtitles. Thank you. -------------------- ★[Follow Me]★ ★Twitter// https://twitter.com/Devsiies ★Tumblr (Art Blog)// http://devsies.tumblr.com/ ★Buy Vocaloid Charms on Storenvy!★ http://www.PixelSound.Storenvy.com + ★More Vocaloid Merch!★ https://www.redbubble.com/people/Devsies/portfolio?asc=u