Tempting Flames feat. GUMI

LETS GO i made my second vocaloid song (im pro) everyday our minds grow bigger I speed drew the drawing of Ardor Blossom Faust (it might be scuffed) I thought of the lyrics on the spot and they might make no sense This song was mainly just for me to play around with Synth V I used FL Studio with Drum Break samples from fl cloud I used Synthesizer V Studio 2 Pro with the vocals from Megpoid Gumi Instrumental Version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DbyOPuDYM9s Any feedback is appreciated! Lyrics: (Oh the fire) (All consuming flame) Fire burning there is smoke in the air, While I lie lost in the darkest room as the light burns brighter than before than before Then before my eyes i, i, turn to ash Fire burning there is smoke in the air, While I lie lost in the darkest room while i Remain motionless before the flames try Again and again I touch the fire The light from the fire may burn (Oh the fire) but it is too tempting to not touch (All consuming flame) Fire burning there is smoke in the air, While I lie lost in the darkest room as the light burns brighter than before than before Then before my eyes i, i, seem to cry Light so hot, makes it hard to keep This amount of pressure impels me to for ever and ever back to sleep I wanna learn about the origins of fire But ill keep trying to find the real me Behind the dark smoke that covers facet of my mind That wishes to be lost to that dark dark light That approaches me toward me The light from the fire may burn (Oh the fire) but it is too tempting to not touch (All consuming flame) Fire burning there is smoke in the air, While I lie lost in the darkest room as the light burns brighter than before than before Then before my eyes i, i, turn to ash The light from the fire may burn (Oh the fire) but it is too tempting to not touch (All consuming flame) Got me wondering how the light is so irresistible to Touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, so irresistible to Touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, so irresistible to Fire burning there is smoke in the air, While I lie lost in the darkest room as the light burns brighter than before than before Then before my eyes i, i, turn to ash The light from the fire may burn but it is too tempting to not touch Touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, Touch, touch, touch, touch, touch,